Thursday, April 2, 2009

Another day without you

Another Day without you


Sadly I say, No please say your not leaving
Stay here don’t go because I need you here
Now I hope that you are trusting and believing
But when I see you I am happy and went to cheer


I remember crying all night over you
But I know that you don’t care about me
Then I see that you really love me too
But then you remember to leave me be


You look at me just as we should now be
You took a chance and asked me to the dance
This is how I can tell that you love me
You put me in this good new perfect stance.

Now you take me back for one last chance
This is the last chance we have for romance.

1 comment:

  1. Brianna this is a really good sonnet and honestly, I can't do better. This sonnet is a little sad and that is what makes it good, not to mention the vision it puts into people's minds. My way of writing a sonnet is nowhere near as good as that. Keep up the good work.

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